Is this deep enough?

Is this deep enough?

Dear Loml, I wrote this while listening to ‘Idea 15’, you should do the same ❤️.

Is this deep enough,

or should I fall deeper?

Do you want me to say your name

with “I love you” trailing after,

like a prayer whispered to the stars,

like a melody humming between heartbeats?

Do you want me to show you the center of my world?

Because I’ll hand you a mirror,

so you can see the galaxies I see

every time you look at me.

Is this deep enough,

or do you want me to fall deeper still?

Shall I write your name into the wind,

so even the trees know who I belong to?

Shall I spill my imaginations at your feet,

until you see how every one of them ends with you?

Do you want me to show you

what intimacy truly looks like?

Because I’ll show you—

not in grand gestures or borrowed words,

but in the spaces between,

where my hand always finds yours,

where my breath lingers on your skin,

where silence speaks louder than promises.

I’ll show you in the way I remember

the smallest details:

how you like your coffee,

the way your voice dips when you’re unsure,

how your smile feels like sunrise

even on my darkest days.

Is this deep enough,

or should I fall deeper?

Because for you,

there’s no limit to how far I’ll go.

I will dive until there’s nothing left of me

but the pieces I’ve given to you.

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